Sunrider 01

So this isn't actually a game or a visual novel; it's a light novel remake of what would have been a visual novel. A lot happened, but basically the gist of it is now it's a series of light novels. I had zip and zero to do with most of it, but I did wind up coming in as proofreader at the last minute. Chapter 01 is up, so check it out. It looks like it'll be cool, especially if you're into lolis with mechs.